Thursday, November 8, 2012

Terrorist and The End of a Career

Terrorist was published in 2006. John Updike died in 2009. This was one of his last novels and his last political novel. Obviously drawing from post-9/11 sentiment in America as well as the difficulty of Islamic issues and tensions in the country; Terrorist is the story of an Islamic youth and his struggle to become a man. Terming this novel as a bildungsroman is not exactly correct because the story is not totally a journey of coming to age. Ahmad Ashmawy Mulloy is the teenage son of an Egyptian man, who abandoned his son when he was three, and Teresa Mulloy a woman lapsed in both her Irish heritage and her birthright Catholicism. Living in northern New Jersey, the young man has a strong belief in his faith and is the prized pupil of the local imam, Shaikh Rashid. Ahmad early on has a school scuffle with a boy who accuses him of having desire for the boy's girlfriend. Ahmad not only avoids the fight but also represses his sexuality toward the girl because he believes that is what God asks of him.

Continuing on, Ahmad is pushed by his guidance counselor to attend college after he completes high school. Ahmad is a good student but chooses to become a truck driver because he believes that higher leaning is dangerous and against God's plan for him. He feels that being a driver will allow him to work with his hands and keep himself closer to God.

Ahmad is drawn into an Islamic terrorist plot to blow up the Lincoln Tunnel. He will fill his truck with explosives, block the tunnel and suicide bomb the tunnel all in the name of Allah. Now, your author has several issues with the above scene and the author who created it. First, I am a proud American. I have proudly proclaimed, "God bless America; and nowhere else." This country has lost thousands of lives to international terror. Oklahoma City, New York, Washington DC and Pennsylvania have all felt the scourge of terrorist action on this soil, not to mention Americans have been killed abroad in places like Somalia, Libya, Lebanon and Afghanistan fighting terror. My grandfather, great-grandfather and two uncles all served this country in the military and my great-grandfather lost his life in Korea defending out liberty. My father is a firefighter and I know he feels the sorrow and pain of FDNY losing 343 valiant men on 9/11 simply doing their jobs. In short, I have no tolerance for radical Islam. Those people hold no value for this world and their lives in it for them to do what they have done. I defend our support for the fight against global terror and the plight of Israel as they defend their sovereignty in the world.

Now, having said that, I think of Updike. And I think of The Coup where he wrote about Islam in Africa. That novel was political and included beliefs and lifestyles that are outside the norm for a chronicler of the suburbs. I feel that he did it well in The Coup but in Terrorist he is out of touch. He doesn't accurately depict what drives the young Ahmad to do what he does. Ahmad is an American and lives a good life (or as good a life can be led in New Jersey) and never in the novel do I really understand what drives him.

In the end Ahmad does not follow through with his plot, being told by his counselor that the plan is known by the FBI and they are ready to apprehend him as soon as he enters the tunnel. Again this detail is not fleshed out well by the aging Updike. It saddens me to see such a master at a loss within his own work. He forgets that the devil is in the details, and that minutiae that made him famous is lost in the work. He tries to jump on the political sentiment in the wake of 9/11 and the new opinions on Islam in this country. But, by 2006 he is somewhat late. So, a day late and a dollar short Updike publishes a novel that is short on details and long on ambitions. Melding the suburbs and a new idea like radical Islam should have been right up Updike's alley. But because he is lacking in detail the work falls short of what is promised. I wish I had never read this one because it diminishes my opinion of the author. As Kenny Loggins says, "You gotta know when to hold em, and when to fold em." And, like the proverbial cowboy having defeated the bad guys, Updike should have known when enough was enough, and he should have rode off into the sunset and left this book in his pocket. We all would have been better off.

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